Christmas is a wonderful, wishful holiday where you get your wishes and they all come true. You travel around the world giving children gifts that they always dreamed of. A cell phone is what I always dreamed and wished for all my life. Santa Claus, if I ever had one, I would use it for good purposes not like some people who just text all the time just for fun. To tell you, I been dreaming for this for this for years waiting for to see you giving me for the first time, a cell phone.
It would be used for certain and good reasons like if I get lost and I need some one's help to help me or actually help them too so I can just call them. Or if you say you need a little info about a project, homework, an assignment, and other info. However, it is useful for being happy and once in while calling your friends because it also good for talking to friends to help you support. This supreme technology has a privilege to call,family, friends, and anyone. It also has the privilege to take pictures of ourselves, friends and families, or anyone that you like to take. It gives weather for the week so we when it rains or snows or is it sunny or cloudy. It helps us know when school is closed or if what the weather is it gonna be like for school to dress appropriately weather it is cold or hot like the summer. Info about the world, it also gives to know data and amazing things that you may not know. Texting is important because if you can’t able to speak or your not available to speak, you can try a thing called texting. I really worked hard though out the years working on papers and assignments, so I think I deserve a gift. Never in my entire life I got in trouble in home, school, and anywhere. No matter what, I get good grades because I earn it by studying and listening. To the end of this, I will tell you that when I grow a little older, I spent spent this money by my self by selling some stuff. When I have one, I will promise to never lose this. Ending this part, I will have to say, I will use a cell phone wisely and never use it just for fun but for certain reasons and purposes! Even though if you will give a cell phone or not, I will still achieve this goal by my self. Just thank you what have you done.
Sincerely,
Rashmi Dogra
Sincerely,
Rashmi Dogra
Rashmi I liked your letter alot. You write alot, and that is a good thing but somethings dont make any sense. For example " To the end of this, I will tell you that when I grow a little older, I spent spent this money by my self by selling some stuff. When I have one, I will promise to never lose this." At one point you never said any thing about monney in this post and you put spent spent. And I did not understand this part either. "Just thank you what have you done." At the end this is a good post but next time you need to focus on makeing the reader understand so they know what your talking about. And remember that when your on a subject you cant say somthing that doesnt have anything to do witth what your talking about. Keep up the good work.
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