School Uniforms

                                                        Paragraph 1-Introduction
             " America has believed that in differentiation, not uniformity lies the path of process. It acted on the belief,it has advance human happiness and it has prospered. "(Louis D. Brandeis) Louis tells us that America is a free country and all about being different means that person is a true individual. Wearing uniforms is a choice and a decision to make. Does anybody think should wear uniforms in school? The answer is simply no. Uniforms don't express teens and teens want to wear the coolest outfit. Parents have have to purchase uniforms and regular clothes. Kids should be different and I ensure uniforms never make someone different than anyone else. The reason why uniforms are not recommended because without uniforms we would able to express our self and everybody else, identify others personality, become an individual, and uniforms don't have to be bought.

                        Paragraph 2-First Reason: Personalities and expressing yourself
             Kids would be better without uniforms so everybody would be able to express themselves and others and identify peoples personalities. Expressing people shows how great everyone and personalities show if some one is intelligent , girly and other personalities. For instance,if there's a new girl in class and someone wants to know what she dresses like ,whether that person's type or not. If some one has to wear a uniform and that person hates it and that person wants to wear the new expansive outfit .It's not fair that any student wouldn't have a choice . People who are for uniforms , they would state it is good to wear outfits that everybody would love.They would be wrong on this because everybody can always ask about the new student instead of looking at its clothing.

                                 Paragraph 3- Second Reason: The Cost is Solved    
                 Costing of uniforms is a big deal, but without uniforms,not much. The cost tells why is the cost too much on uniforms and what can people do to make it a better.If kids did wore uniforms, parents would have to purchase uniforms and clothing outside of schools.The more someone buys, the less the money.The less the money,the less someone can afford. Some people can't afford uniforms.The people who are for uniforms would say only buy regular clothes say it costs less. They are wrong on this because parents don't have to buy new expansive clothing for school.

                          Paragraph 4-Third Reason: Individual Suits Everyone
Being an individual stands for being one different person. A different person is a way to understand others . Understanding others means to hear about people and see how they are different from any other person.Not only that, but comparing and contrasting other people's personality.In a way, if some one is smart and the smart one likes to know much about the new person .Well ,it can be easily compared and contrasted. Being one shows some one is born for that and no one would take that place.Share ideas and compare styles from one another.The opposition would say people can get to know that person better. T he opposition is wrong on this because it would lead violence, bulling,and arguments.Because of that , they would have lots of differences.

                         Paragraph 5-Conclusion
It's not fair that kids from K-12 have to wear the same clothing everyday cause of the uniforms.Edison township kids would be better without uniforms so they would able to express their selves and identify personalities.Costing of uniforms are a big deal but without uniforms, not much.Being an individual stands for being one person.This shows everybody's talents, style, favorites, and etc... without the use of uniforms!

Sincerely,
Rashmi Dogra

Boardroom Persuasive Essay

                                                  Boardroom Persuasive Essay    

                                          By Rashmi Dogra      Product-Tech Foots   

          
         Shoes are all over the world just for all ages! Tech foots are the right shoes that are warm, highly fashionable, and runnable. Aren’t ordinary, dull colors like red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, black, and white. But there are more dazzling than that. They come in superior, bright colors. Don’t worry about cold on every ones feet. These shoes have a warmer for all ages. Protects the foot from a freezing foot. They aren’t just ordinary sneakers, they are “warm, extremely, colorful sneakers” that knock peoples socks off. Tech foots is the shoe that heats up every ones  feet and dazzle people.

         Tech foots have dazzling colors that make it more extreme. The colors are blazing red, firey orange, yellow sunshine, forest green, sea blue. purple durple, shadow black , and white bright. There not just ordinary colors,there are sparked colors that impress and make people jealous. “ Sneakers were coming out in basic solid color uppers, white soles, and soft accents.In desperate times, people get creative, and that creativity pushed the majors to get competitive by supplying every  color scheme.” (What Sneaker Trends Say about us, http://sneakers.about.com/od/sneakers101/a/sneakertrends.htm) There also highly resistible. If people look at the shoes, they would say, I can’t stop looking at them. Because of their color and style. The colors impress everyone!

       Tech foots are extremely warm that heat up every ones feet! If any ones feet are cold, they’ll warm them. It will help it relax by the warmness in their feet. It will also calm everyone. This will help because our company believes that being calm will help our audience keeping away from anger, sadness, and frustration. Heat, calmness, and relax sensation is the best!

       80% of Americans use it in gyms. It will help kids and grow-ups run more faster on fitness days. Because of how people can run fast, is its perfection. Every ones shoe gets stinky in a while. But Tech foots don’t! Non-stinky. Has a special fresh smell inside the shoe. While playing sports, running, etc..... it makes you comfy than ever. Comfy than boots. Comfy than Uggs. And much better than Uggs. People who where this will feel the it in the shoe while doing these activities.

          Don’t worry about the cost of the money. There’s a $15.00 coupon. Every year, sneakers got more expensive. $50.00-$100.00-$200.00!!! But all people are safe now. Adults would be worried about their money. Don’t worry about the control of the money, Tech foots saves people’s money. It only costs $34.99, plus a coupon. A $15.00 coupon. It would be $19.99. The shoes price would be a very low price.
         Tech foots are not just fashionable. They are all over the world for everyone to buy. They are so many superior colors. The colors show every ones color spirits and how colorful you are. These shoes have warmness. It’s so warm than burning fire. TFs are good for running and pay less. For gym, it is good for running, playing sports, exercise, jump roping, kicking, and etc... Just remember Tech Foots are for everyone and there everything that everybody wants!
         

Reflection Thinking Points

      I like my piece because it has all the required things. Celebes's, Techniques,  and many more. Has a special song " Cozy uggs, cozy uggs, stick your foot in the cozy uggs. YEAH! It even has emotions and feelings. For example, "Well, what I'm I waiting for? I got to get these uggs!" I feel I am good expressing things, remembering my lines, well dressed and prepared. Some areas where I could improve are making eye contact. Speaking louder and being much braver. Persuasive essay writing techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time are don't be nervous and imagine your talking to yourself. But also relax and not be so afraid. Be calm and be like a professional. The part of the writing process I enjoyed most is trying to remember the lines because you feel like your really in a commercial on TV. You feel different because you never do this at all. And you get to  remember lines that you wrote that seem easy. My goals for the next time I write are to add more details and add support into it. Make feel that your really, really want this. Meaning excitement. Three things I learned about myself throughout this project are I really come up of a lot of things. Had ideas that appeal to the audience and maybe I should try doing this more often. The mentor authors who informed my writing were Kim, myself and my teachers. Readers will see my mentor author's or author's writing craft in my essay when they read the sections  of their lines, when they say the price, persuasive techs, slogan, and etc........


This is my reflection thinking points for my commercial
Uggs

Convice a TV Station

      TV station, I would consider my commercial to be on TV. Because my commercial has everything. It has a excellent slogan, "Tech foots are cool for you. It's all over the world for you!" It even is for everyone. Kids, adults, babies, everyone. It's good for gym like jogging, running, walking, and everything. Not only it's good for uses but makes your foot comfortable. It warms your foot if it gets cold. Not only that, it relaxes and heals your foot. AMAZING, RIGHT! The amazingly awesome shoe has a supreme design with a fashionable sense. Who wouldn't love these shoes? I'm sure that no one will disagree. It's cool, it's awesome, and fantastic!
I am sure you'll except me!

                              Tech foots

Elastica

          Skechers is a type of popular shoe for kids and grown ups.  This stood out to me as a persuasive language because this commercial persuaded me to buy this product. It pacifically said in the advertisement, " Don't let laces slow you down. Look cute, have fun. Skechers!" In this advertisement, they don't want you to buy laces because they think there uncool. They want you to buy the best shoe in the world which is skechers. Laces are totally uncool because of the fact that laces can off so you have to tie them over and over again which is really irritating.  Skechers are cool because no woodchips go in and its tight so it won't come off. It evens has different kinds of skechers. High tops, glow in dark, regular, breeze, and more.


Do you agree or disagree?