I like my piece because it has all the required things. Celebes's, Techniques, and many more. Has a special song " Cozy uggs, cozy uggs, stick your foot in the cozy uggs. YEAH! It even has emotions and feelings. For example, "Well, what I'm I waiting for? I got to get these uggs!" I feel I am good expressing things, remembering my lines, well dressed and prepared. Some areas where I could improve are making eye contact. Speaking louder and being much braver. Persuasive essay writing techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time are don't be nervous and imagine your talking to yourself. But also relax and not be so afraid. Be calm and be like a professional. The part of the writing process I enjoyed most is trying to remember the lines because you feel like your really in a commercial on TV. You feel different because you never do this at all. And you get to remember lines that you wrote that seem easy. My goals for the next time I write are to add more details and add support into it. Make feel that your really, really want this. Meaning excitement. Three things I learned about myself throughout this project are I really come up of a lot of things. Had ideas that appeal to the audience and maybe I should try doing this more often. The mentor authors who informed my writing were Kim, myself and my teachers. Readers will see my mentor author's or author's writing craft in my essay when they read the sections of their lines, when they say the price, persuasive techs, slogan, and etc........
This is my reflection thinking points for my commercial
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