Everytime everybody should try and try until they get it right. "Fall seven times, stand up eight."(Japanese proverb) Every person should never give up. They should keep trying and trying because this tells everyone they are the best to be. Giving up means that person never tried to acheive their goal. Everyone will get it right somebody but not just anyday. A day where that person keeps trying and trying until they get it right. This relates to a personal experience that everyone has been through.
As a student, I always try to make it in to the A honor role. I never got it in for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd marking period. But I do tend to keep trying my best to get an A honor role in the 4th marking period. I got a really close to getting a A honor role in 1st marking period. In 2nd, I almost had it, 0.5 percent I needed to get the A honor role. For 3rd, I dropped. I got two B's but extremely close to getting it. I got this by trying and trying. If I gave up, I would not able to acheive one of my important goal. That would tell me that I didn't try to work hard enough for this accomplishment. But I did since I kept trying harder and harder which made me more confident. This concludes to historical figures how they never gave up and kept trying.
Martin Luther King is a historical person who never gave up. He cared about having whites and blackes equal rights. He didn't want whites to sit in front and blackes to sit in the back in the bus. And whites and blackes to go to different schools. But Martin never gave up his dream. Martin spoke to everyone that everyone should have equal rights and no one is to be offended. Don't judge a person's skin, character, or anything else. He was a person who didn't stop but he also made fair rights. Martin was a man who kept trying.
Giving up is a huge thing that someone never wants to do. Even if it's a homework assignment, test, sports, getting into honors, or anything. As a student, anyone doesn't want to give up, they want to keep trying. Also, a historical figure doesn't want to give up their huge dream. Never give up and keep trying even if it takes a long time to acheive it!
You did a fab job on this essay. I know that you always work hard and do your best, so I think you will get the all A honor roll for marking period four. I liked your example from the society, but next time write Martin Luther King, Jr. because if you do not then it could be his father or someone else. Overall, great job!!! =)
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