Rashmi Dogra
Sam and Joe were home from school. They both looked up at the calender and marked off their day. They saw it was there parents anniversary. Mom came home from work.
“Kids, I’m going to the super market. Love you.” mom informed.
They realized their dad is still at his office. So Sam thought of an idea for this very special day.
“ Joe, let’s surprise them. Like a very special dinner or something.” said Sam.
Joe differed. “No, let’s have a surprise party. I’ll order the food and set up the decorations.”
“ And I’ll invite the guests for the party.” Sam said.
Everything was already. The food, the decorations, the planning. But something was missing. No one of the guests arrived. Sam called everyone. Her aunt, uncle, grandparents, parent's friends, and everyone relative to her family.
“Joe, I tried all my best. Some people are busy, it’s too far away, work, and other needs. I’m sorry.” Sam frowned.
“It’s fine. We can think of a another plan. Besides, all the food and the decorations are done.” Joe explained.
Sam and Joe were thinking of a plan. But no ideas came out. They got several ideas but didn’t seem to work out. They thought about the idea of having no guests at all. But Sam thought no guests means no party.
“ We don’t need a party.” said Joe.
“ What do you mean? Party is what are parents would like.” questioned Sam.
“ We can just have a little dinner with ourselves and our parents. ” Joe said.
The door had opened. It was their parent had entered in the house. Mom and dad looked at the decorations and food. When Sam and Joe saw them, they yelled...
“ HAPPY ANNIVERSARY! ’’ Joe and Sam screamed.
Mom and dad were surprised of their hard work, So Sam and Joe took chairs for them to sit down. And that anniversary wasn’t that bad after all.
Great job! This was a great post. You had a great amount of when Joe and Sam were talking. you explained the story well and you did a fantastic Job. Overall, you did a great job with your blog post.
ReplyDeleteWow! This was an amazing story. I liked the way you used the dialogue in your story. But, I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, your problem could have been a little better. Overall, you this was a great story.=)
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